tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1897609126562221001.post2870025184618302909..comments2012-03-15T14:46:01.355-07:00Comments on Westside Writers -- Serious About Writing: Fall 2011 Challenge Entry #4Thomashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11342381333736743869noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1897609126562221001.post-54718530158421359972011-09-30T21:41:28.614-07:002011-09-30T21:41:28.614-07:00I liked how it started with her hovering over clic...I liked how it started with her hovering over clicking and then ended similarly. You did a great job of capturing her tortured excitement.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07138682498522090332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1897609126562221001.post-59203681752596501302011-09-30T12:20:03.633-07:002011-09-30T12:20:03.633-07:00Great job Whitney! I really enjoyed the choice of ...Great job Whitney! I really enjoyed the choice of words to help with the feeling of suspense and I really think you capture the angst related to interacting on the computer -- it seems harmless enough but is it?Thomashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11342381333736743869noreply@blogger.com